Love You With A Broken Heart

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I don't understand why I can't take my mind off of you,
I just can't stop missing all those things that you do.
Everywhere I turn I swear it's like I can see your face,
All I want is to be back in your arms because I hate being in this lonely place.
Sometimes I wish you still felt the same way,
But now it's like you could care less what I have to say.
I don't know what happened to us, we used to be so good,
But in the end I realized that I had the whole idea of "perfect" misunderstood.
Now all I do is sit in my room and cry,
Wanting nothing else but to just lay here and die.
You meant so much more than the world to me,
And now that we're not together, I'm just living my life in misery.
You left me with this pain that I'll never forget,
But being your girl is something I'll never regret.





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Nicole67 said...
Jun. 6, 2012 at 1:28 pm
I really do understand how you felt/ feel. I have felt this same way about my best friend/ex bf. Your poem was really good but one thing, when you said, "but now it's like you could care less" should actually say "but now it's like you couldn't care less" meaning he doesnt care at all. besides that i thought it was an amazing writing.
 
billlover420 said...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 6:33 pm
this is amazeing hun :) i almost cryed the feelings of a broken heart is there but yet wen u said being your girl is something u will never forget it ended it prefcetly i cnt really decribe what i want to say baout this in words but its super good
 
FishyPrincess said...
May 20, 2011 at 12:20 pm
I know exactly how you feel. I just went through this with my ex. He was my world. This poem is amazing and totally brought tears to my eyes
 
lexii_121 replied...
May 21, 2011 at 10:38 am
Thank u so muchh ; i felt this way about my ex for so long. I want my readers to kinda feel what i feel. Thankk u (:
 
FishyPrincess replied...
May 23, 2011 at 11:51 am
Your totally welcome. You truely are an amazing writter
 
elisianicole101 said...
May 19, 2011 at 8:39 pm
this is just amazing.!!!
 
lexii_121 replied...
May 21, 2011 at 10:36 am
Thanks so much (:
 
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