Love You With A Broken Heart

April 20, 2011
By lexii_121 BRONZE, Pine Bush, New York
lexii_121 BRONZE, Pine Bush, New York
4 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Live your life to the fullest. "


I don't understand why I can't take my mind off of you,
I just can't stop missing all those things that you do.
Everywhere I turn I swear it's like I can see your face,
All I want is to be back in your arms because I hate being in this lonely place.
Sometimes I wish you still felt the same way,
But now it's like you could care less what I have to say.
I don't know what happened to us, we used to be so good,
But in the end I realized that I had the whole idea of "perfect" misunderstood.
Now all I do is sit in my room and cry,
Wanting nothing else but to just lay here and die.
You meant so much more than the world to me,
And now that we're not together, I'm just living my life in misery.
You left me with this pain that I'll never forget,
But being your girl is something I'll never regret.



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on Jun. 6 2012 at 1:28 pm
Nicole67 PLATINUM, Indianola, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Someday, someone will walk into your life and make you realize why it never worked out with anyone else."
"we often put up walls not to keep people out, but to see who cares to get through"
“Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind.”

I really do understand how you felt/ feel. I have felt this same way about my best friend/ex bf. Your poem was really good but one thing, when you said, "but now it's like you could care less" should actually say "but now it's like you couldn't care less" meaning he doesnt care at all. besides that i thought it was an amazing writing.

on Oct. 8 2011 at 6:33 pm
billlover420 GOLD, Justin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Boy, when you're dead, they really fix you up. I hope to hell when I do die somebody has sense enough to just dump me in the river or something. Anything except sticking me in a goddam cemetery.  People coming and putting a bunch of flowers on your stomach on Sunday, and all that crap. Who wants flowers when you're dead? Nobody. ~J.D. Salinger,The Catcher in the Rye,

this is amazeing hun :) i almost cryed the feelings of a broken heart is there but yet wen u said being your girl is something u will never forget it ended it prefcetly i cnt really decribe what i want to say baout this in words but its super good

on May. 23 2011 at 11:51 am
FishyPrincess BRONZE, Modesto, California
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
The best part of Believe is the lie.

Your totally welcome. You truely are an amazing writter

on May. 21 2011 at 10:38 am
lexii_121 BRONZE, Pine Bush, New York
4 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Live your life to the fullest. "

Thank u so muchh ; i felt this way about my ex for so long. I want my readers to kinda feel what i feel. Thankk u (:

on May. 21 2011 at 10:36 am
lexii_121 BRONZE, Pine Bush, New York
4 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Live your life to the fullest. "

Thanks so much (:

on May. 20 2011 at 12:20 pm
FishyPrincess BRONZE, Modesto, California
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
The best part of Believe is the lie.

I know exactly how you feel. I just went through this with my ex. He was my world. This poem is amazing and totally brought tears to my eyes

on May. 19 2011 at 8:39 pm
elisianicole101 PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing ever truely dies, it just transforms into something beautiful

this is just amazing.!!!


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