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The water beneath my feet
The feel of the wind on my face and blowing my hair
The smell of sea salt fills the air
I close my eyes and seal this image tight
My best friend and family by my side does not compare to what I see in your eyes
I feel your presence your very being
Sitting next to me looking out at the endless sea
I rest my head on your shoulder
You wrap your arms around me tight
I feel safe in your arms
You whisper I’ll always be here
I turn red as a rose in the morning dew
I feel the beat of your heart against mine
The way you feel with the ocean mist
I feel the sand beneath my feet as much as I feel your heat
I stare at you
You stare at me
Our eyes looking into each other’s soul
I get up and run, smiling, laughing
You chase after, lift me up and swing me around
You put me down and smile
I smile back
I wrap my arms around your neck
Pull you in and kiss your full lips, soft and warm as a rose petal
Then I wake up and your sleeping next to me
I gaze with intense desire, smile, lay down by your side and go to sleep





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soccerfreak6 said...
May 20, 2011 at 1:44 pm
i really enjoyed this poem. you are a great writer!
 
LilGirlBadd17 said...
May 20, 2011 at 10:47 am
A great write; that's what you are.
 
kaykay101 said...
May 20, 2011 at 8:15 am
this is amazing! great job!
 
theWiind This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 19, 2011 at 9:59 pm
i loved it (:
 
tortor1129 said...
May 19, 2011 at 7:00 pm
thanks so much guys that really means a lot :)
 
Jessi-ca said...
May 19, 2011 at 2:04 pm
love it great job
 
RachelHuber said...
May 19, 2011 at 11:55 am
this is so loving and just breathe taking. keep up the writting
 
Catiebugg said...
May 19, 2011 at 10:04 am
Beautiful.
 
vampier said...
May 18, 2011 at 7:51 am
i like this poem lol
 
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