Distance Defeated

April 16, 2011
By GoldenEagle SILVER, Ahmedabad, Other
GoldenEagle SILVER, Ahmedabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Those who joyfully leave everything in God's hand eventually find God's hand in everything.

Miles Apart, yet conjoined into one,
Miles, though huge in number, but successful none.
Though in different universes, together we’re seated,
See distance, you’re defeated.

We’ve moon to witness our union,
We’ve sun to enlighten our timely separation,
The messenger wind too by us is enchanted,
See distance, you’re defeated.

One in tears and one in smiles,
O distance, do you have such miles?
It’s the waves which have kept us connected,
See distance, you’re defeated.

It’s time that ONE DAY is near,
Our pain will end and it’s time for you to fear.
The moment is not away for which we’ve awaited,
See distance, you’re defeated.

The author's comments:
Time and innumerable factor cause our separation from our loved ones The distance becomes a villain here. This poem is addressed to that devil called "Distance" which causes separation. The poem mentions moments of union in separation and tells distance that it hasn't been successful in the act of separation.

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This article has 2 comments.

Allina said...
on May. 17 2011 at 8:14 pm
Grt thots, very well composed, keep it up!!

monica said...
on May. 17 2011 at 9:37 am
keep writing... 

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