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Angela

March 9, 2011
By Anonymous

That pale little hand being led to the bedroom
Those corduroy jeans being tossed to the floor
That innocent smile as he leans in to kiss her
The green of her eyes as they lay down for more
The very same eyes I caught reading Harry Potter past their bedtime.

Those bouncy red curls flattened against the bedspread
Twisted and tangled and coated in gel
Those delicate hands exploring his body
Those tiny girl’s hands, that I knew so well
The very same that shook me awake year after year on Christmas morning.

What happened to the little princess?
The cross country runner?
The sweet baby girl?

The science fair champion:
Arching her back and closing her eyes
gasping and panting and
pulling him closer
To the body I held in the hospital.

The clumsy ballerina:
Being rocked back and forth
Going limp with pleasure
Sighing satisfied
With the voice that asked me for a later bed time.

My rosy cheeked child who loved musical theatre
and wore purple sweaters
is gone.

The author's comments:
A few weeks ago my best friend and I were sitting at her kitchen table just like we do every Tuesday after school and before play practice. Out of nowhere her mother burst into the kitchen holding the bottle of birth control pills that my friend had been taking behind her back. She didn't yell at my friend for hiding the fact that she'd been having sex from her, nor did she break into tears. She just stared at her daughter for the longest time with this penetrating expression on her face. For days it haunted me it was confused, wounded--indescribable. The pain I found in her eyes was my inspired this poem.

Note: The poem is entitled 'Angela' after the woman who's face inspired me. This name has been changed to protect her identity, and that of my friend.
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on Dec. 22 2011 at 8:07 am
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Well good job you did great with descriptions of her. Very well written
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This was astounishing! I love it :) Haha especially the title ;D hahaha good job :)
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well, that I can agree with.
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I really felt more like a mother than a teeanage girl after reading this. That's really strong, if you can transport a reader into someone else's mind through poetry. I love it.

Hope some of you can check out my work! I'm dying for some comments on my poems, especially "Helium Balloons" :)

anonymous said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 5:52 pm
Thanks! I meant that the subject has really curly red hair which she almost always gells. This is a portrait of a girl (albeit a very subjective one) and I was trying to really get her image in the readers head. 
Amsterdamsel DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 5:39 pm
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what do you mean by coated in gel? :/

greast poem btw. it's really original.

Volleyballgirl1812 said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 1:53 pm

wow. You put yourself in the mothes mind and you captured the betrayal (I think) and disapointment the mother felt. YOu did a fantastic job on this and it deserves to be awarded something.

 

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when I said beautiful I just ment it was a beautiful piece of work...
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Wow, you can really feel the hurt that this mother would have/did. I really like how you put this. If you have time can you check out my work? I'd really enjoy your thoughts on some of my pieces
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this piece is awesome! Keep it up.
Check out my work, please :)
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-like- LMAO!!!!!
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i think the authors note is almost as powerful as the poem.... wow :)
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This is just... It has left me speechless! There aren't enough words to describe what an amazing job you have done with this poem!
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lol i know right?! AMAZING!!!
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Beautiful? I wouln't say that. It made it seem very......disturbing. Wrong on so many levels. You assume automatically that she is a teen or adult....... but at the same time because of all the imagery you cant help but thinking the way as the mother........ It makes something so trivialized by our society seem once again frightening......... still, five stars.
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I kept on trying but it wouldn't let me click ten stars :)
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Amazing use of words and descripstion. I can feel the love the mother had for her daughter and her sadness of her growing older
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Wow I love this, it shows how the mother feels of her daughters lost childlike innocence. This is fantastic!
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This is AMAZING! I love all of the small details you included. This is intriguing and dangerous at the same time. Great job! :)
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Did you really think no one would notice that that's YOUR work. Dont lie to us, child.