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March 21, 2011
destructive life
beautiful death
out of control neatness
and harmful usefulness
is such a dark light

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x803xKiller said...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 2:27 pm
WOW. i really liked this peice, and I click your profile to see what else you had written, and I saw that you were all ready one of my favorite writters on here. You're very talented, keep writting :D
hikaru-nara-kheel replied...
Apr. 19, 2011 at 2:00 pm
thank you very much, you just brightened my day
newday said...
Apr. 16, 2011 at 3:35 pm
diffrent. i like diffrent. please look at some of my work
LiveInTheMoment said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 9:20 pm
This was...interesting...unique...and slightly odd...in a good way. I hope that you continue writing in your own personal style, just like this. Great job! If you have time, please check out and comment on my poem, The Girl Inside. Thanks!!!! 8)
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