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Frozen Black Mourning

March 12, 2011
By binkybecka BRONZE, Lockport, New York
binkybecka BRONZE, Lockport, New York
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Frozen. Black. Mourning.
Life is frozen, and has been for a very long time
Time passes
One tries to move forward but cannot help but look back

An abyss of blackness covers the soul
As well as the very inner workings of ones mind
The mourning never ceases to exist
It is forever day in, and day out

Regret
What could have been done to fix this
What could have been done to help with that

Every once and a grand while in this frozen black mourning
The bright rays of the warm light come through
And for a moment, even if it’s just for a moment
I can forget and just be happy

But the frozen black night soon comes
For the light cannot last forever
And it pulls me back into my eternal mourning

I hide my tears and sorrow in a shadowy black veil that covers the face
In this way, all who are around me will not be troubled by my tears
For this never ending road I walk through is something I must do alone
I walk through a vortex abyss, in this frozen black mourning


The author's comments:
What inspired me to write this peace is the nature of depression in people of all ages, especially teens. It is also about losing someone that is dearly loved, whatever way that may be. I hope for people to better understand how people's mind work with depression so one may know what to look for and recognize that they need help before it is too late.

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on Jun. 6 2011 at 3:27 pm
binkybecka BRONZE, Lockport, New York
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aw thank you hun, that really means alot of all of the amazing peoples feedback and help!

Katie Shep said...
on May. 19 2011 at 11:46 am
This was very emotional, thankyou for writting this. it could really feel yor true emotions shine through. your amazing keep writting