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Sarcasm

March 15, 2011
By Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"If You Don't Fight Back, You've Already Lost."
"Don't suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs."


Sarcasm is me.
The Sarcastic smile,
The Sarcastic expression,
The Sarcastic eye roll,
The Sarcastic remark,
My weapon,
My shield against hurt.

The author's comments:
I use sarcasm everyday. I just decided to write about it.

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on Apr. 15 2011 at 8:39 am
dontforget GOLD, Cortland, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The best things in life are left unseen. That's why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream."

you're welcome :]

on Apr. 14 2011 at 9:47 am
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
32 articles 4 photos 178 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If You Don't Fight Back, You've Already Lost."
"Don't suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs."

i get that a lot :) i am going to try not to use them anymore. :) thanks for the comment!

on Apr. 14 2011 at 8:14 am
dontforget GOLD, Cortland, New York
15 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The best things in life are left unseen. That's why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream."

I love the ending line, it's perfect for this poem! I notice in a lot of your poems though that you use commas a lot. They can be a useful tool but deciding to add a few less could really enhance your writing. :] good job!

XCLover GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 8:56 pm
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
18 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!" ~Anon
"You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone." ~Percy Cerutti
"The hug is incomplete without you :3" NinjaMan

I agree with KyotoLove, it feels like there is something more, but I really like how the end of the poem the sharp sound of the word hurt is like a door slamming in the reader's face, as if you are saying "yes, i admit it, i have this weakness. no you can't see it!" it's very teasing to the reader. good work :)

on Apr. 13 2011 at 9:48 am
ofpaintedroses GOLD, Berne, Indiana
12 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
"How long is forever?"
"Sometimes just one second."

i feel like there is more to this poem. that last line "My shield against hurt"

I like that you write with emotiom. I like this one. KEEP IT UP!!(:


Izzy101 said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 9:32 am
Izzy101, Bellevue, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
I am free of all prejudices. I hate everyone equally

I love that poem. It really expresses the true you!

on Apr. 13 2011 at 9:18 am
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
32 articles 4 photos 178 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If You Don't Fight Back, You've Already Lost."
"Don't suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs."

Thank you. That means a lot. I am glad you liked it. 

JuStMe.DeZZi said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 7:26 am
JuStMe.DeZZi, NA, Other
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Like a true Daria, awesome. Your poems are short and blunt, but incrediblly filled with impact and wit in each word.