Sarcasm

Sarcasm is me.
The Sarcastic smile,
The Sarcastic expression,
The Sarcastic eye roll,
The Sarcastic remark,
My weapon,
My shield against hurt.





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dontforget This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 14, 2011 at 8:14 am
I love the ending line, it's perfect for this poem! I notice in a lot of your poems though that you use commas a lot. They can be a useful tool but deciding to add a few less could really enhance your writing. :] good job!
 
Beachgirl1 replied...
Apr. 14, 2011 at 9:47 am
i get that a lot :) i am going to try not to use them anymore. :) thanks for the comment!
 
dontforget This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 8:39 am
you're welcome :]
 
XCLover said...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 8:56 pm
I agree with KyotoLove, it feels like there is something more, but I really like how the end of the poem the sharp sound of the word hurt is like a door slamming in the reader's face, as if you are saying "yes, i admit it, i have this weakness. no you can't see it!" it's very teasing to the reader. good work :)
 
KyotoLove said...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 9:48 am

i feel like there is more to this poem. that last line "My shield against hurt"

I like that you write with emotiom. I like this one. KEEP IT UP!!(:

 
TheSweetNerd said...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 7:26 am
Like a true Daria, awesome. Your poems are short and blunt, but incrediblly filled with impact and wit in each word.
 
Beachgirl1 replied...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 9:18 am
Thank you. That means a lot. I am glad you liked it. 
 
Izzy101 replied...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 9:32 am
I love that poem. It really expresses the true you!
 
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