I Have Done it Again

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I have done it again
But the control has been taken out of my hands
And placed in the hands of the protectors
He tried to resist temptation
But the succumbed to the opposite extremity
For there was only one other option to
Give himself up to the devil
Sold his soul to the poor sad man
Who needed it for his own ill daughter
The daughter recovered
The father did not
And he floated down the Ganges and Styx
And down into hell
Far below the place he always knew he’d go
Though he stopped before he reached it
To go get some coffee





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We.Are.Broken. said...
Apr. 3, 2011 at 10:19 pm
Great poem, just have fun with it reguardless of what it come's out to be. The more you write the better it gets :)
 
Meditation_of_Ravens replied...
Apr. 5, 2011 at 11:35 am
Thanks! <3
 
newsoulpoet said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 5:37 pm
Very humorous. At first it seemed  kind of dark, then you understand the joke at the end. Great work!
 
Meditation_of_Ravens replied...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 10:15 pm
Thanks. I'm trying to lighten up my writing.
 
newsoulpoet replied...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 4:28 pm

Well, you are doing very well.

 

(p.s. write more, because this one was awesome!)

 
Meditation_of_Ravens replied...
Apr. 10, 2011 at 12:08 am
I will. Thanks for the support. <3
 
newsoulpoet replied...
May 28, 2011 at 3:40 pm
You are welcome. We all need all the support we can get! Have fun and keep writing! ;-)
 
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