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you held hands with me.
you placed a kiss on my cheek.
you told me everything will be fine.
we spent many days together.
hanging out, enjoying the weather.
to bad it was all a lie.
i remember the nights you held me close.
i remember the days you never let go.
i remember you wiped the tears off my cheek sayin baby please believe me.
you told me don't listen to them, it will be fine in the end.
i believed every word you said, sleeping softly in my bed, dreaming of you and me, and all those memories.
you told me you loved me from the start.
when you said those words, you rescued my heart, from years of damage of feeling unloved.
i thought you were the one sent down from above.
now here i am.
thoughts of anger in my head.
the truth i would have forgotten eventually but the lies, they'll sit here and rot for eternity.



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MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy said...
Mar. 20, 2011 at 9:47 am:
My suggestion would be to delete this piece from TI, edit it, then resubmit it to TI. All it really needs is to be edited for a few grammatical mistakes and some punctuation. Other than that, this was a really good poem. I'm glad I had the opportunity to read it. :)
 
paigey replied...
Mar. 20, 2011 at 12:00 pm :
thank you for the advice i will make sure i fix those things
 
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Anonymous01This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 9:48 pm:
Paigey this is one of the BEST pomes ever, i am blessed to be the first one to comment on this piece :DDD
 
paigey replied...
Mar. 20, 2011 at 11:59 am :
thank you so much it means alot to me
 
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