Save My Life

February 18, 2011
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I have so many hidden emotions inside.
Let me pull the covers up,
Just let me hide.
You try to control me, you try to show me the pain.
…the pain that I’ve caused you…
but your search is in vain!
You’ve hurt me so much
That only time will tell.
It’ll just reveal to you my living hell.

You don’t know my life,
You don’t know my fate!
Amidst all this strife, I add to it, hate.
I don’t despise you.
No, it’s me.
I want to be open,
I want to be free.

You try to understand…
All these feelings; my life…
But it’s too late now.
They control this knife.
I don’t want to hurt myself again.
Take this from me
And save my life.
Be my friend,
It’s too much for me…
Please, just save my life.

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AllForJesus said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 8:54 pm

This is really really fantastic. I like it a lot. It has real meaning. Something more than "Eh, I'm depressed. Life sucks." It's a nice refresher from most of the poetry on this website. I love it. Very nicely written. :)


God bless! :D

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