February 17, 2011
By Alfilisara DIAMOND, Peoria, Arizona
Alfilisara DIAMOND, Peoria, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
A word to the wise is unnecessary. It's the stupid ones that need the advice. -Bill Cosby

Your cute little eyes
So big and pretty

Why do you cover them?
So much shadow
Heavy liner
And mascara

You could be beautiful
Can’t you see?
We could be friends
If you weren’t so nasty

I’d love you to death
You’re so cute
Pretty blonde hair
Played with and styled
too much

Flaunting your body
You shouldn’t have to
Cover it up
It will be just fine

Walking around
Like you own it all
I do that
I understand

You could be
So much better
I’ve seen you before

You used to have
Such pretty eyes
Full of innocence and purity
But now it’s gone
Can’t you see

I had to say good-bye
Turn away and leave

Too quickly
You became

The author's comments:
It saddens me that this girl and I used to be friends, but she is long gone to me, and I hate her. I don't think we could ever be again.

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This article has 1 comment.

on Mar. 15 2011 at 10:28 pm
That was a powerful work....I have a former friend who was also this way. However, I suppose my story differs a bit since we were like Yin and Yang. She always wanted to be accepted....I've never cared. Anyways, 5/5. I'm sorry this happened to you...


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