Mother's Day

March 2, 2011
By Bkwhizkid BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
Bkwhizkid BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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My mother
you know i respect you
in every loving way.
You know i
always listen to what
you say.

Even though we may have
our difficulties.
I know if
i get in trouble,
you'll always stand up
for me.

I know when I look
at you.....
I see love and care,
But i tell you,
the relationship we share

it's like one
many have never seen
but what could you expect.
The bound between
a mother and a son
is something I will never
forget.

I love you mom
and you know it too
Happy Mothers Day!
Finally another day
dedicated to
you.



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Mayim12 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 6 2011 at 8:31 pm
Mayim12 BRONZE, Elk Grove, California
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Nope it wass Good! :D

Its hard to find a good Mother's day poem, this should go on a greeting card! I like that you kept it simple and sweet. Good job!


on Mar. 6 2011 at 4:38 pm
Bkwhizkid BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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I'm sorry about that.

Overall besides the i's was the poetry bad in any other way?


Mayim12 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 6:11 pm
Mayim12 BRONZE, Elk Grove, California
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You forgot to capitalize some of your "I's"..........




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