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Sipping My Love

February 8, 2011
By Almost_Lover GOLD, Mission, South Dakota
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My love for you is like a glass of water
When I take a drink
I take a chance of getting closer to you
But yo always runaway or disappear for a long time
My glass is half empty of your love
I'm tired of drinking our invisible love
After I seen you with another girl
I seen you where drinking each other refillable glasses of love
That when I made the choice to spill my glass of love over
All that remains is a drop of love in the empty glass
In the near future will you realize I've always been here
Will you take that sip of love on Valentine's Day
Or will I eventually get evaporated into the deadly air

© Kevin G., Atlanta, GA

The author's comments:
I hate and love Valentines Day cause it reminds me I'm still lonely, but it give me hope that he'll realize I'm still here =]
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Almost_Lover GOLD said...
on Apr. 11 2011 at 10:23 am
Almost_Lover GOLD, Mission, South Dakota
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I kno there are many fishyz in the sea, because i'm bi curious... I feel like a horrible friend I hurt one of my best friends, cause we did stuff that I kinda regret but don't idk...I'm so confused

lol but i don't want to hurt any fishyz, cause this one time I went fishing and i ended up taking a fishy home as a pet not food cause i felt so bad for hurting it

ashleyn PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 8 2011 at 12:34 pm
ashleyn PLATINUM, Zeeland, Michigan
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"Don't take life to seriously, nobody makes it out alive anyways"-Unknown

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haha yeah hard times...but i laughed at ur comment at there are other fishes in the sea...cuz it's so true! (:
Almost_Lover GOLD said...
on Apr. 8 2011 at 10:04 am
Almost_Lover GOLD, Mission, South Dakota
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Thanks, Once I read it over again, I was so sad cause it reminded  me the day that guy i wrote about got a girlfriend after that agh... no we don't talk....sad 

oh well there are other fishes in the sea, lol well thanx

ashleyn PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2011 at 10:37 am
ashleyn PLATINUM, Zeeland, Michigan
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I love this...like with a passion! haha I love the whole thing, the idea and the creativity, the fact that this whole thing is a metaphor sort of, and the words you use to describe your feelings. It's amazing! NEVER GIVE UP! (;