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Sipping My Love

My love for you is like a glass of water
When I take a drink
I take a chance of getting closer to you
But yo always runaway or disappear for a long time
My glass is half empty of your love
I'm tired of drinking our invisible love
After I seen you with another girl
I seen you where drinking each other refillable glasses of love
That when I made the choice to spill my glass of love over
All that remains is a drop of love in the empty glass
In the near future will you realize I've always been here
Will you take that sip of love on Valentine's Day
Or will I eventually get evaporated into the deadly air



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ashleyn said...
Apr. 7, 2011 at 10:37 am
I love this...like with a passion! haha I love the whole thing, the idea and the creativity, the fact that this whole thing is a metaphor sort of, and the words you use to describe your feelings. It's amazing! NEVER GIVE UP! (;
 
LaShay_25 replied...
Apr. 8, 2011 at 10:04 am

Thanks, Once I read it over again, I was so sad cause it reminded  me the day that guy i wrote about got a girlfriend after that agh... no we don't talk....sad 

oh well there are other fishes in the sea, lol well thanx

 
ashleyn replied...
Apr. 8, 2011 at 12:34 pm
haha yeah hard times...but i laughed at ur comment at there are other fishes in the sea...cuz it's so true! (:
 
LaShay_25 replied...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 10:23 am

I kno there are many fishyz in the sea, because i'm bi curious... I feel like a horrible friend I hurt one of my best friends, cause we did stuff that I kinda regret but don't idk...I'm so confused

lol but i don't want to hurt any fishyz, cause this one time I went fishing and i ended up taking a fishy home as a pet not food cause i felt so bad for hurting it

 
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