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In my heart

February 4, 2011
By RisingMomoM.R. SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
RisingMomoM.R. SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
i think of experiences and images...as being stored in the rootcellar of my mind, hibernating in the dark in the dark until they are ready for stories.
-Daniel Keyes


Till death do us part,
You will always be,
In my heart,
No matter when we,
Are sadly apart,
You will always be,
In my heart,
So when you think of me,
I hope that you love me too,
Because I sure do,
But please,
When you see me,
In your memories,
Don’t remember the wrong,
That I have done,
Just remember the,
Fun with you and me,
Always remember that you,
Will always be in my heart,
Even when we are sadly apart,
Even when death do us part,
I’ll always remember,
You and your heart<3


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on Feb. 21 2011 at 12:36 pm
nickykens ELITE, Draper, Utah
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Cliche-ish... needs work but good potential.

kesher said...
on Feb. 21 2011 at 3:35 am
kesher, Singapore, Other
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1. I hate people who try to advertise their stuff.

2. Great poem, i like how the weird word order makes it hard to read. ( as in the over-use of enjambment) ... Great work with that, represents the chaotic feeling of love.


on Feb. 18 2011 at 8:57 pm
RisingMomoM.R. SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
i think of experiences and images...as being stored in the rootcellar of my mind, hibernating in the dark in the dark until they are ready for stories.
-Daniel Keyes

thank u! wil do!

on Feb. 18 2011 at 8:50 pm
lilmo23 PLATINUM, Pompano Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only option you have.

i really liked this! i like how u incorporated the wedding vows.. it was cute! hey u should check out my stuff! :)