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In my heart

Till death do us part,
You will always be,
In my heart,
No matter when we,
Are sadly apart,
You will always be,
In my heart,
So when you think of me,
I hope that you love me too,
Because I sure do,
But please,
When you see me,
In your memories,
Don’t remember the wrong,
That I have done,
Just remember the,
Fun with you and me,
Always remember that you,
Will always be in my heart,
Even when we are sadly apart,
Even when death do us part,
I’ll always remember,
You and your heart<3




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nickykensThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 12:36 pm:
Cliche-ish... needs work but good potential.
 
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kesher said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 3:35 am:

1. I hate people who try to advertise their stuff.

2. Great poem, i like how the weird word order makes it hard to read. ( as in the over-use of enjambment) ... Great work with that, represents the chaotic feeling of love.

 
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RisingMomoM.R. said...
Feb. 18, 2011 at 8:57 pm:
thank u! wil do!
 
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lilmo23This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 18, 2011 at 8:50 pm:
i really liked this! i like how u incorporated the wedding vows.. it was cute! hey u should check out my stuff! :)
 
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