His words

January 26, 2011
His words cling to her mind
Not wanting to let go
Hearing things that aren't kind
Treating her like some circus show
These words hung on her for deer life
Cutting through her heart like a knife

His words tore through like a mad dog
Shredding every part of her
Leaving her in the fog
Without another whisper
Her tears fell like bombs
Bursting as they hit the ground

Join the Discussion

This article has 2 comments. Post your own now!

razberri9 said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 7:46 pm
I really like your imagery and detail in explaining. :) Nice work!
PeepLoveR replied...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 2:11 pm

why thank you reneee lol it only took me a few minutes last year to right ha this is my favorite one out of all of my other ones


bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback