An Apple (notice the capitalization
It's important
(That line break
was too)
And the reference to Adam and Eve)
Sidles and slouches in a wrinkled cluttered place
(the line is
Cluttered
and there is an alliteration
also I am vague)
Mold creeps,
With personification,
On our old apple
(I'm addressing you)
A worm won't ever choose
To reside within
Such a place.
(Nobody wants the apple
because mankind has ruined
Our knowledge (that's commentary
On society
with a rhyme.)
It's important
(That line break
was too)
And the reference to Adam and Eve)
Sidles and slouches in a wrinkled cluttered place
(the line is
Cluttered
and there is an alliteration
also I am vague)
Mold creeps,
With personification,
On our old apple
(I'm addressing you)
A worm won't ever choose
To reside within
Such a place.
(Nobody wants the apple
because mankind has ruined
Our knowledge (that's commentary
On society
with a rhyme.)
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