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January 25, 2011
Look at me,
I'm smiling!
(On the inside, I'm crying)
Look at me,
I'm laughing!
(On the inside, I'm dying)
Yes mom,
I'm fine.
(Please see that I'm lying)
I swear,
I'm alright.
(I'm not, don't quit prying)
I promise it's not true,
He didn't break my heart.
(he ripped it out, stomped it, and tore it apart)
Of course I believe
That you love me like you say.
(how can I trust you at all after today?)
I'm only yours, dear,
My heart is yours to take.
(falling in love could be my biggest mistake...)

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Mashley310 said...
Aug. 20, 2012 at 3:22 pm
This is brillaint! It's extremely relatable. Also, I love the rhyme. It's so natural!
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