Our Gays

January 24, 2011
the people

ponder about.
the pain they feel
deep inside.
rejection will
fester like boils.
they want a relief.
crawling in the underneath
they stand up tall.
sacrificing for this feeling.
one nags
for their people.
others watch in ignorance.
“they aren't people no
not a human indeed,”
they fight for happy.
no. they couldn't win.
ignorance will always be
the fall of civilization.

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GraceKelly said...
Feb. 19, 2011 at 1:56 am

I really like this. It shows a point, and it, to me, really has a lot of meaning. I like your writing, especially your poems. :)

Check out my stuff, I only have two things posted on this site. I have a lot more poems posted on Quizilla that are a few years old. I'll give you my user name for that site if you want to look it up. 

NsyncLanceFan replied...
Feb. 19, 2011 at 2:39 am
sure. thank you for the comment. i would enjoy reading your writings =D
GraceKelly replied...
Feb. 19, 2011 at 6:37 pm

I'm not positive, but you should be able to find my poems and stuff if you go to google and type in: klion AND quizilla

My one poem posted on this site is also on quizilla, I thought about transfering them all to this site, but I figured it would take too long. Let me know if you're not able to find my profile on quizilla.

NsyncLanceFan replied...
Feb. 19, 2011 at 7:57 pm
found it. dang, you have written a lot of poems! i write stories mostly, but poems are fun. and easy. and they always turn out beautiful, no matter who has written them =D
GraceKelly replied...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 2:28 am
The thing I really like about quizilla is that it shows what date you published it, and it also lets you go back and edit what you have already posted. So yeah, you can see that my poems on quizilla are pretty old,.. from a few years ago, but you can also tell like what I was feeling when I wrote each one. I think its cool to go back and look at old essays or poems that I wrote years ago. 
NsyncLanceFan replied...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 2:38 am
yeah that stuff is cool. journals and diaries do that to me, but i write them so irregularly that my last entry was years ago. and i've written a ton of stories years ago and i can see how much my writing has improved. i see what you mean. in old writings, you can see how you were then and who you are now and see how much you've changed (either for good or for the better). the stuff i have written is fanfiction and i have a site that everything is posted on. i've written a lot. writing is fun.
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