Undefined

December 16, 2010

By HaleyDRog., Easley, SC

I’m ready to make a difference.
I want to step out of my comfort zone and create a huge wave of impact.
I want to see the world through the eyes of myself, not through some silly little picture.
I want to believe I will be successful.
I want to live with several passions.
I want to create something no one has ever seen before.
I want to inspire and be inspired.
I’m ready to get out of Easley, South Carolina and begin the journey of a lifetime.
I’m ready for it all.
I will succeed.
I will believe.
I will dream big, and I will be the hopeful.

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BrightBurningCampeador said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 3:17 pm

THis poem is 100% true for me as well. Except for the bit about Easley, S.C. lol

HaleyDRog. replied...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 4:24 pm

Thanks, and I'm glad you could relate!

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Vicky11 said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 11:37 am

Totally relatable! We all dream, and dream big, and I don't think we should let go of those dreams :) Well done

HaleyDRog. replied...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 4:23 pm

Thank you!

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Hazel-daisy said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 7:35 pm

i for one defientaly (don't know how to spell that!) relate! i think its great, basically what most teenagers feel! my piece called Bigger Than This is very like this piece :)

HaleyDRog. replied...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 4:22 pm

Thank you and I will check that out!

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NinjaGirl said...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 2:44 pm

I like the concept and the things you want to do with your life :) Could maybe use some more descriptive words. The lines could probably flow better if they were shorter, but I still like it!

HaleyDRog. replied...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 6:01 pm

Thank you!

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hopelovepain said...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 1:40 pm

I like the transition from "I want" to "I'm ready" to "I will." Beautiful work! Good luck - keep writing! (:

HaleyDRog. replied...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 6:40 pm

Thank you so much!

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GangstaEyes said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 10:29 pm

You definitely accomplished what you set out to with this poem - many people can relate to this, myself included. I can't wait to get out of my small town and live my life to the fullest! My favorite lines are the second and third! :)

HaleyDRog. replied...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 6:42 pm

Thank you! I live in a small town too and I can't wait to see the rest of the world!

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puzzlesleftincomplete said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 4:29 pm

I just want to say that I feel the same way right now. I want to get out and figure things out... This poem is really great, so keep up the great work!

HaleyDRog. replied...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 5:36 pm

Thank you so much and I'm glad you feel the same way!

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Mariam.J said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 10:48 am

L.O.V.E.D it ! :D

God, you're good :O

I like the easiness, the direct and strong tone . Like, I can just picture this girl with her head held high, chin up . So determined :')

HaleyDRog. replied...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 12:35 pm

Thank you. That really means a lot!

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Dark_Mind said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 9:56 am

It really was very inspiring, Great Message.!

HaleyDRog. replied...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 12:34 pm

Thank you!

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cowgirl4ever said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 8:54 am

Awesome! Inspiring! Encouraging!

HaleyDRog. replied...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 12:34 pm

Thanks a lot!

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