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December 16, 2010
By HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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I’m ready to make a difference.
I want to step out of my comfort zone and create a huge wave of impact.
I want to see the world through the eyes of myself, not through some silly little picture.
I want to believe I will be successful.
I want to live with several passions.
I want to create something no one has ever seen before.
I want to inspire and be inspired.
I’m ready to get out of Easley, South Carolina and begin the journey of a lifetime.
I’m ready for it all.
I will succeed.
I will believe.
I will dream big, and I will be the hopeful.

© Charlotte M., Naples, FL

The author's comments:
Everything in this poem is completely 100% true! While writng this particular piece of work, I began asking myself "What do I want to do with my life?" and answered them honestly in this poem. I hope it speaks to people and I hope it will relate to how teenagers feel.
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HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 12:31 am
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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EXACTLY, What would be the point? Thank you!
thetruthawaits94 SILVER said...
on Jun. 24 2011 at 11:29 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 351 comments

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i LOVE IT! it has a wonderful theme. We all want to do great things with our life, if not, what's the point?
HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jun. 24 2011 at 11:18 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thank you! It means a lot!
sterotypicalwhitegirl SILVER said...
on Jun. 24 2011 at 10:25 pm
sterotypicalwhitegirl SILVER, Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
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Regina: No one understan

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very inspiring, loved it
JoPepper PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 6 2011 at 9:50 am
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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You're welcome!!!!! ;))
HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2011 at 12:55 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thank you so much!
JoPepper PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 5 2011 at 11:50 am
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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I've read alot of your writing and it's fantastic!!!! I always ask myself these questions!!!! ;D
HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2011 at 11:05 am
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thank you!
HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2011 at 11:05 am
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thanks so much!
HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2011 at 11:04 am
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thank you and I hope it would relate  to how people feel!
HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2011 at 11:03 am
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thank you so much!
HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2011 at 11:02 am
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thank you! And I didn't know that, but thank you for pointing that out!
JustAnotherOwl SILVER said...
on Jun. 4 2011 at 3:01 pm
JustAnotherOwl SILVER, Unknown, New York
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And hope can be your sword, slaying darkness with belief."

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This is another great piece! You are extremely talented. You know that, right? (: I especially love...

"I want to see the world through the eyes of myself, not through some silly little picture."

Beachgirl1 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 17 2011 at 12:42 pm
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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This is great! GREAT! I loved the way you used I in your poem. Your feelings came across well and strong! 5 Stars once again :) 
Mystisha BRONZE said...
on Apr. 17 2011 at 5:22 am
Mystisha BRONZE, Mumbai, Other
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Its inspiring..nd at tis moment it jus suitz me cuz i've jus completd my schooling nd need 2 dcyd abt ma career..bt wateva it will b... I believe I'll b successful..!!

So gud..keep it up..i'd lyk 2 read mor' of ur poems..:)

TanGem PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 1 2011 at 9:19 pm
TanGem PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Whoa, I LOVE this! I'm graduating from high school soon and this poem describes me completely. It's the newly adopted motto of my life. Thanks for sharing and nice choice of photo!
HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Mar. 27 2011 at 7:05 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

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Thank you for the feedback. And I will work on that. Thank you!
Gettysburg63 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 26 2011 at 5:14 pm
Gettysburg63 PLATINUM, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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Good work on the poem. The use of "I" makes the poem that much more effective. I though do think you need a stronger ending. I would simply end it with something like "I am ready". Keep up the good work!
McCoy13 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 23 2011 at 1:06 pm
McCoy13 BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
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are you still in school

 

Endless1996 GOLD said...
on Mar. 19 2011 at 4:07 pm
Endless1996 GOLD, Bay City, Michigan
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O.O you deffidentally will do big things!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAY TO GO!!!!