The Feeling of Pain

January 15, 2011
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The only thing we all go through.
But there is nothing we can do.
It can be internal.
It can be external.
It can be very weak.
Or, it can be at its peak.
You can feel this in many ways.
This feeling can last for days.
This feeling is just like rain.
There is no way to stop pain.

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Hotaru said...
Apr. 4, 2011 at 6:38 pm

AHHH!!!! You're driving me insane Osvaldo. My poems look like child's play next to yours. Very good work, all of your poems hold a lot of emotion and I love them.


-Once Again Your Virtual Friend Named Hotaru

xxbloodyroses66 said...
Jan. 31, 2011 at 12:03 pm

this is beautiful. it is like the sound my soul makes everyday.

keep writing.

KristyLynn_TM said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 9:16 am
I really like this poem. It's so true.
WinterFairy replied...
Feb. 12, 2011 at 12:33 pm
Wow. Really scary and powerful, but, like KristyLynn said, oh so true.
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