January 4, 2011
By Anonymous

Looking down seeing deciding.
All my regrets, all I’ve done to you…
Yet, you still saw me through.
Here it comes…
The wind that will push me over the edge,
Spinning out of control.
Falling down faster, faster…
I’m hanging by a thread.
But no I’m not dead, not yet…
So I’m spending these last seconds with you,
Pouring my heart out, to the side you never knew.
By now you must of let me part.
But you are still locked up in my heart.
I am sorry, my love for what I have done,
For putting you through my life,
But now you must let me,

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on Jan. 25 2011 at 12:13 pm
weaselkiesel BRONZE, Rochester, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"My theory is if you look confident, you can pull off anything"- Jessica Alba

I don't really understand what you are trying to get across. Sometimes I felt like you were undergoing regret and others apologizing for something. I was confused about what happened that you were apologizing for and upset about but not willing to change.

Gambit SILVER said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 2:04 pm
Gambit SILVER, Small, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Yesterday is gone, Today is almost over, And tomorrow is never promised.

aww love it

on Jan. 24 2011 at 7:26 am
BeYOUtiful_13 BRONZE, Tinley Park, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
“Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring.”
~Marilyn Monroe

I like it a lot. i can tell you put a lot of feelings towards this

ilovejosh123 said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 5:57 am
This is very good i like it a lot nice job :D


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