January 9, 2011
By ArtIsLove BRONZE, Perryvilly, Missouri
ArtIsLove BRONZE, Perryvilly, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't measured by the breathes you take, but by the moments that take your breath away."

Circling round and round you,
I'm the white moon surrounded by darkness.
You're my earth, not my sun;
I'm in orbit around you.
I don't need you, but I can't leave you,
Your selfish gravity chains me here.

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AmbersGotIT said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 9:44 pm
AmbersGotIT, Nevis, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing is empty

Very good. Love it :)

on Jan. 19 2011 at 9:14 pm
FirePixie203 BRONZE, Trevor, Wisconsin
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This is quite an interesting poem. It's a good analogy for a relationship you can't seem to leave. Very Nice.

asofnow GOLD said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 6:55 pm
asofnow GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing gold can stay ~ Robert Frost

This is really good, did you ever think of turning it into a haiku? Check out my work too please, thanks.

on Jan. 19 2011 at 5:56 pm
krazykelsey BRONZE, Janesville, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Love is a work in progress for the rest of you life

I really like the last part of the poem.your sellfish gravity chains me here. it mean so much to me. i know exactly how you feel keep writing

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