Gravity

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Circling round and round you,
I'm the white moon surrounded by darkness.
You're my earth, not my sun;
I'm in orbit around you.
I don't need you, but I can't leave you,
Your selfish gravity chains me here.





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AmbersGotIT said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 9:44 pm
Very good. Love it :)
 
FirePixie203 said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 9:14 pm
This is quite an interesting poem. It's a good analogy for a relationship you can't seem to leave. Very Nice.
 
zhlen This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 6:55 pm
This is really good, did you ever think of turning it into a haiku? Check out my work too please, thanks.
 
krazykelsey said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 5:56 pm
I really like the last part of the poem.your sellfish gravity chains me here. it mean so much to me. i know exactly how you feel keep writing
 
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