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Changeover

December 21, 2010
By Katsa08 SILVER, Sidney, Iowa
Katsa08 SILVER, Sidney, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't take yourself so seriously, no one else does."
"What others think of me is none of my business."


The Seasons led
By Rose tinted red
And sky's tears of empathy

New breath awakes
By Earth's give and take
Giving life a chance to be

Then sweltering heat
As two seasons meet
The sun glowing fearless and bright

Grass grown from under
By the patience of summer
With its color, vibrance, and light

But the flowers they wither
As changes come hither
Feathers of trees change their hue

The breeze becomes wind
As the season folds in
The strength of all Autumn renewed

And chill becomes bite
Day becomes night
Cold flurries be coming our way

The green of summer, and lo
Is buried in snow
Falling down despite what we say

And thus, this is life
Though it may calls us strife
I all comes back in due course

In a world of machines
Shallow human dreams
Nature must be its own force


The author's comments:
Its about the seasons and about the changes in life in general.... enjoy!

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Katsa08 SILVER said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 9:17 pm
Katsa08 SILVER, Sidney, Iowa
5 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't take yourself so seriously, no one else does."
"What others think of me is none of my business."

thanks so much!

PJD17 SILVER said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 4:07 pm
PJD17 SILVER, Belleville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I do the best imatation of myself- Ben Folds

great oien sunoek with a nice flow  keep up the nice work

Megan.J.B said...
on Feb. 23 2011 at 10:06 pm
Megan.J.B, Sault Ste Marie, Other
0 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Here's the real truth. There are eight million people in this city. And those teeming masses exist for the sole purpose of lifting the few exceptional people onto their shoulders. You, me? We're exceptional."
- Green Goblin. :)

I liked your poem. It was pretty and relatively simple, but it had a nice flow. I liked your comment before about making mundane things seem beautiful because I have a poem that does the same thing and I really saw that represented here. I didn't like the second last stanza though because it lacked focus. I loved the last stanza because it pulled people and our problems into the poem.

Well done. :)


Katsa08 SILVER said...
on Feb. 23 2011 at 10:01 pm
Katsa08 SILVER, Sidney, Iowa
5 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't take yourself so seriously, no one else does."
"What others think of me is none of my business."

Thanks again, I try to make even the most mundane things sound beautiful in my poetry. :)

on Feb. 23 2011 at 9:19 pm
Internal-Love PLATINUM, Queens, New York
33 articles 3 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing's black or white, its all just a shade of gray---

















TI "Live your Life" ft Rihanna

i love how expressive this poem was! :) It's beautiful, and you are quite the poet.