Tainted smile

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It’s all just for me,
My secret, my mystery,
My encryption, my eternity.
It lifts me up when I’ m down;
Something in which I’d love to drown.
Energy surges through my veins,
I’m floating over the clouds;
Yet I’m rooted to the ground.
I can see nothing:
Nothing other than your tainted smile.

On days I don’t see those pearly whites;
I realize why I find it tainted.
It reflects your heart
A painting yet to be painted,
A pain yet to be shared
A love too strong to understand.
Tainted with the fear of loss
Tainted with the pain of the ones you love.
I live to see it every day
And I will see it until I die
No matter what you say
We’ll be together
I promise I’ll always be there
To see your tainted smile.





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ForeverIsADistance01 said...
Apr. 23, 2011 at 6:43 am

Thanks for those encouraging words Nina!

Hope you have a great senior year!

Glad to know you liked the poem :))

 
Nina mathur said...
Apr. 9, 2011 at 9:47 am

Sandhya!!!

This rocks!

Pity we can't put it on the school magazine now!!!!

Missing you guys here at school you were great seniors!

 
scumbagnot12 said...
Apr. 9, 2011 at 3:27 am

I normally dont comment but dis 1 is reeeeeeeeeelly gud!!!

Keeeeeeep it up!

DO dey teach creative writing in skool?

 
ForeverIsADistance01 replied...
Apr. 9, 2011 at 9:36 am

Thanks!

They don't do creative writing in our school.... but we have scholarships for the same. If you get one you'll get trained.

 
ksddf88 said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 12:29 am

Isn't that a van gogh painting?

Somehow I think that goes perfectly with the poem!

Well done!!

 
Scatty2693 replied...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 12:32 am

THANKS!!

you're right it is a Van Gogh.....

Glad you like it!

 
Sime34 said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 12:27 am

Hey I loved it!!!

Can you write more 'soapy' ones like this?

looks like I found my genre: soapy!!

 
Scatty2693 replied...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 12:34 am
thanks... nice to know!
 
sally 3254675 said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 12:18 am

Wow! this is great!!

Keep writing...

who is this about?

 
SophiaCross said...
Jan. 9, 2011 at 7:46 pm
This is adorable! I like how it almost condradicts itself...the whole tainted smile part.
 
Scatty2693 replied...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 12:46 pm

* thank 

P.S - did you really like it?

 
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