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Breakign your fall

i watch-
etched in silence, that cold winter night
he went out the door and into the darkness
and i watched as your crumbled to pieces like rain.
fell to the floor-
again not again.
i came up behind you-
catching the shards,
cutting my fingers...
breakign my heart.
when will you listen!
your trend and your style-
they speak so much more than your friend.
reconcile!
my heart can't keep breaking your fall....



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Raytheraym said...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 4:41 pm:
Very good! I like it. Very emotional!
 
Linghoon replied...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 4:49 pm :
thanks :) i will check out some of your work!! 
 
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