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I lOve yoU,

i alWayS wILl.
DeEp insIdE,
I'Ll alWAys bE wiTh yoU.


dEepEr thAn tHaT,
i wIll AlwaYs bE AppArT oF yoU,
aS You ShaLl remAin a PaRt oF ME.



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lostnhim said...
Jan. 4, 2011 at 8:40 pm:
Im so sorry about your Uncle...This poem is nice though. I think that the capitaliztions are a good idea. For people that just skim poems, it will make them slow down, and actually take the words in.
 
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Dec. 26, 2010 at 5:06 pm:
I think the randomly capitolized letters have a pretty cool effect. May I pay my respects to your uncle?
 
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