False expectations: Runaway

December 3, 2010
By JSchwartz GOLD, Gainesville, Florida
JSchwartz GOLD, Gainesville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
The problem isn't always the 1%, but the 99% who fight each other to be the 1%.


Seldom thought, war that was never fought. The story that goes longer than never ending, the story that still makes me wonder why my first poem is in pending. Wanting to be famous but never getting crap, running in circles but never doing a lap. Wanting to offer something that gives nothing and get something back, runaway but never turn your back.

The author's comments:
Ever since I started listening to music I have been interested in the spotlight, being famous. Its a widely known thing to think, but its a craving I have had for a little while. This is a poem displaying it.

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on Dec. 27 2010 at 12:31 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

thanks so much! and no problem

JSchwartz GOLD said...
on Dec. 27 2010 at 12:24 am
JSchwartz GOLD, Gainesville, Florida
13 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
The problem isn't always the 1%, but the 99% who fight each other to be the 1%.

Of course of course, thank you for the comment :)

on Dec. 21 2010 at 6:41 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Recovered from autism?! That's amazing!!! This was pretty good! And you're right! Don't we ALL wanna be famous! I want to be a famous writer (don't think that'll ever happen ha!) My favorite part of this (or the part that really stood out in a good way) was "running in circles but never doing a lap." AWESOME!!! Would you mind checking out some of my work if you have time? Thanks!


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