Is this what you wanted?

November 29, 2010
By Evanescence GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
Evanescence GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Life is meaningless if u dont know who u are!

"A picture is worth a thousand words, yet a phew words from my heart can bring millions to your mind"

"History will be kind to me, because I will write it" - Winston Churchill


I often fixate my mind on the reasons that you have done what you have.
Why did you leave us in this fashion?
You left me broken and feeble, and you didn’t have the decency to care! Maybe you thought about it in its full intensity! Maybe you spent every creeping hour, every passing day, planning how you would torment my saddened soul. Spitefully preying upon the thought of us suffering. Why did you force yourself upon God, when it wasn’t your time? Was it to make a point, or gain respect? If so then you’ve earned it! E quake at the thought that you might actually think you would make me happy. So pleas don’t blame me, but the agony that I feel makes me wonder. Is this what you wanted?

The author's comments:
I've had to ask myself this question too many times for the people I've lost.

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on Feb. 8 2011 at 1:14 pm
Evanescence GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
13 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is meaningless if u dont know who u are!

"A picture is worth a thousand words, yet a phew words from my heart can bring millions to your mind"

"History will be kind to me, because I will write it" - Winston Churchill

Thanks! It says I need your poem's names to find yours.

on Feb. 2 2011 at 5:04 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

It took me a second to realize what you meant by "leaving in this fashion" and "forcing yourself upon God when it wasn't your time".

This is so powerful. I have some poems that are sort of similar, or at least poems that were inspired by similar things happening in my life. Check them out? (I think something changed on teenink. Instead of just clicking my name, I think you have to search my screenname in the advanced search)


on Jan. 21 2011 at 4:23 pm
BlackKittie SILVER, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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my poems?idk actually..........click on my name?idk

on Jan. 21 2011 at 1:52 pm
Evanescence GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
13 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is meaningless if u dont know who u are!

"A picture is worth a thousand words, yet a phew words from my heart can bring millions to your mind"

"History will be kind to me, because I will write it" - Winston Churchill

Thanks. I will! How can I read yours?

on Jan. 15 2011 at 2:25 pm
BlackKittie SILVER, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
8 articles 1 photo 55 comments
this is really powerfull...you have talent!keep writing :)


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