Who Has Pity Now?

November 29, 2010
By LuckieMistake PLATINUM, Florence, Colorado
LuckieMistake PLATINUM, Florence, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"What doesn't kill me only, will make me stronger in my head..." Papa Roach, Kick In The Teeth

Your story's such a heartbreak,
A tragedy really,
So everyone else thinks.
But is it really that bad?
What's really happened to you so far?
Your story's made up of many things,
Your stort only tells one side,
Its based on fact but filled with lies.
Who has pity for you now?
The truth is out in the open.
You're exposed.
Now everyone can see just what you've been through.
Your mask is gone.

The author's comments:
The lines that say "Your story only tells one side, Its based on fact but filled with lies" are actually lyrics from Taproot's song Fractured.
I wrote this one about someone I know in my life. She always tries saying that her life is messed up when it's really, near perfect.

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