How We Felt When It Ended

November 25, 2010
By LeahRae<3 GOLD, Maiden, North Carolina
LeahRae<3 GOLD, Maiden, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Them that dont like me can leave me alone." -- Jacky Faber (From Bloody Jack)


Completely unmoved.
Cold. Hard.
Eyes of stone.
Heart of steel.
Nothing hurts.
At least...I cannot feel it.
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Torn apart.
Limp. Afraid.
Watering eyes.
Breaking hearts.
Everything hurts.
At least...I cannot make it stop.
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Her lips are quivering.
Those perfect, cherry lips.
Tears are streaming
From those beautiful blue eyes.
Her body shakes
Trying to hide the pain.
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His lips are scowling
Those soft, comforting lips
His eyes are searching
Those wonderful warm green eyes
His body is still
Trying to hide the compassion.
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I cant give in.
I cant let her see my love for her.
I cant tell her how I feel.
I have to yell and scream.
Tell her how she means nothing.
Show her that I dont care.
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I cant give in.
I cant let him see the scars.
I cant let him see the passion.
I have to whimper apologies..
Tell him that it was my fault.
Show him that he's in control.
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She's cowering.
She's beaten.
She's finished.
She stands.
She holds her head up high.
And stares into my eyes.
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He's angry.
He's tired.
He's finished.
He sits.
He hangs his head.
And refuses to look at me.
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I remember.
I remember our conversations.
Our hugs.
Our laughter.
I look up.
I remember how happy I was.
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I remember.
I remember our walks.
Our kisses.
Our arguments.
I look down.
I remember how hard it was.
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She's strong.
But she's hurt.
She's upset.
Bust she's determined.
She's done.
It's over.
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He's weak.
And he's broken.
He's upset.
But he's confused.
He's sorry.
But it's over.
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Torn apart.
Limp. Afraid.
Watering eyes.
Breaking heart.
Everything hurts....
I love you.
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Completely unmoved.
Cold. Hard.
Eyes of stone.
Heart of steel.
Nothing hurts....
I love you.


The author's comments:
It's written in boy/girl/boy/girl perspective through the whole piece. About me and my ex and the pain we felt.

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Anne1 said...
on Jun. 9 2011 at 6:09 pm
Damn girl you can realy right. I enjoyed it.


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