Forever and Ever my Best Friend you'll be

November 18, 2010
By ToRemember SILVER, Somersworth, New Hampshire
ToRemember SILVER, Somersworth, New Hampshire
6 articles 1 photo 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont ever tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon.


I love you forever and always you see, forever and ever my best friend you'll be. when you think of music that i used to love i hope you remember your very best bud.
Dont ever forget all the times that weve shared, the laughs the jokes, even days we were scared, because no matter what you'll be in my heart, for even with distance friends are never apart. Remember we'd stay up deep into the night, speaking of boys, our futures and frights. sometimes wed even stay up til the dawn, but lets face it, we've both moved on. So just close your eyes and remember it all, and remember ill be there whenever you fall. even when im many miles away, ill think of my friend each and everyday. so dont you dare think about forgetten me, cause forever and ever, my best friend you'll be


The author's comments:
In life, things change and thats just the way it is, but some people hold dear to their hearts the few things that are truly special to them. I recently,this past summer 2010 moved from my beloved home of somersworth NH to Arizona. leaving behind so many people, including my best friend who i wrote this for. i wont ever forget you steffanne, you will always be my best friend. this poem is kind of old, my writing has improved drastically, dont judge too harshly.

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on Dec. 12 2010 at 3:07 pm
Gracious PLATINUM, Go Away, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"life sucks and then you die, yeah, i should be so lucky"



-Jacob, Twilight

I’m still that girl who falls when she runs, Getting back up, because falling is fun.

Good! you are a fantastic writer!

on Dec. 6 2010 at 4:18 pm
ToRemember SILVER, Somersworth, New Hampshire
6 articles 1 photo 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont ever tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon.

thanks (: and yea i know i wanted to add more but i could only come up with cheesy near-rhymes. but its special in its own way i guess. :)

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on Dec. 6 2010 at 12:08 pm
drf409 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"The most beautiful things in life can't be touched but it must be felt with the heart." -UNKNOWN

I like the way you explained the good times you and your friend had. My favorite line is the first line, it said, "I love you forever and always you see, forever and ever my best friend you'll be." It shows me how you truly care about that person. I feel as though you could have went in more details about the friendship. You did good overall; keep up the good work.

on Dec. 5 2010 at 10:58 pm
ToRemember SILVER, Somersworth, New Hampshire
6 articles 1 photo 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont ever tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon.

THANKS for commenting very much (:

on Dec. 5 2010 at 8:42 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

WOW. I really love this :) pure talent :) thank you for posting!!

on Dec. 5 2010 at 8:20 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Your very welcome! try clicking on my username.(:

on Dec. 5 2010 at 8:19 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Your Very Welcome! click on my username, that should get you to my profile.(:

on Dec. 5 2010 at 8:11 pm
ToRemember SILVER, Somersworth, New Hampshire
6 articles 1 photo 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont ever tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon.

im trying to find your work but i cant, ill keep trying. THANK YOU SO MUCH though!!! (: (:

on Dec. 5 2010 at 7:08 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

I agree with DakotaShadow... You have a serious talent! This poem is genius! Your a genius! Keep writing! (: Would you mind taking a look at my work? I would really like your opinion.

on Dec. 5 2010 at 5:27 pm
ToRemember SILVER, Somersworth, New Hampshire
6 articles 1 photo 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont ever tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon.

THANK you a lot!!!!!!! (: i feel a bit more confident now. 

on Dec. 5 2010 at 5:21 pm
Gracious PLATINUM, Go Away, Kansas
22 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"life sucks and then you die, yeah, i should be so lucky"



-Jacob, Twilight

I’m still that girl who falls when she runs, Getting back up, because falling is fun.

judge to harshly? what are you talking about this is amazing! I loved it, the entire time i was reading it i was thinking 'i wish i could show this to my bestfriend'

on Dec. 5 2010 at 11:42 am
ToRemember SILVER, Somersworth, New Hampshire
6 articles 1 photo 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont ever tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon.

thanks so much!!!!! im happy you like it and i can tell your being honest (:

on Dec. 5 2010 at 10:45 am
OriginalCarbonation GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
dream as if you'll live forever
live as if you'll die tomorrow

i really like this! in some ways it doesnt seem that much like a poem, maybe its just because of the format - a paragraph you know. but i really really loved the topic, i know exactly what you were describing here. and the way you put it was very moving. getting a little teary here :)


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