Maybe...

November 6, 2010
By WintersRevenge PLATINUM, Ponte Vedra Beach, Florida
WintersRevenge PLATINUM, Ponte Vedra Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Yay! I love being purple!" ~Patrick Star, Spongebob Squarepants


Perhaps it will rain so hard it will wash away my makeup and lies, uncovering the truth.
If I run fast enough, will the winds take me up above the ground?
Perhaps I will be able to fly level with the clouds, so that the raindrops are merely my tears.
Maybe the winds will then drop me harshly to the ground, and as I plummet, I think it might be the end.
And then maybe you'll be there to catch me.
Maybe.


The author's comments:
I wrote this a few months ago, not as a poem, but actually as a Facebook status. I had a lot of people comment on it, saying how great it was, and I thought that it might actually make a good poem. I'm still not sure it's a poem, but I really don't know what it could be. Anyways, I hope you guys like it!

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on Feb. 15 2011 at 4:44 pm
WintersRevenge PLATINUM, Ponte Vedra Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Yay! I love being purple!" ~Patrick Star, Spongebob Squarepants

Thanks! I'll take that into consideration! I love to hear people's honest opinions about my work :)

on Jan. 16 2011 at 2:00 pm
sweetly_broken GOLD, Garner, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
We never know how big we are until we are asked to rise.

i think it does make a good poem! i love poems that are kind of uncertain. It wasn't lacking emotion or anything! I just might suggest taking out the "and" and the beginning of the second to last line. but . . . great job!!


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