Red Importance

November 21, 2010
Red,
The heat of summer,
My face when he walks by,
Blood that trickles from wounds,
Mentally and physically,
My blotchy eyes after a self-defining cry,
The hand print on my cheek,
After being a smart mouth,
Valentines I won't ever get,
From the right person,
The wilting roses one mamaw's grave,
My lips before a date,
A cherry on top of a sundae,
The lid to my favorite drink,
The ketchup smiley on my burger,
The tomatoes in grandma's garden,
The ink grading my paper,
The stripes on our flag,
My toenails chipping away,
Like your confidence,
Red.





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AnonyMiss said...
Nov. 23, 2010 at 11:36 pm
i love all of the bright images this brings to my mind...and it has such a note of finality with the last line simply saying 'red'. good job!
 
DaddiesDoodle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 23, 2010 at 6:24 pm
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!! I just started writing and it means sooo much to me! I have more work but not that has been approved yet!!! god bless~
 
iliveforthemoonandthestars said...
Nov. 23, 2010 at 5:41 pm
your poem is amazing- i love it!
 
Brrrreeeeeeeeee said...
Nov. 23, 2010 at 12:53 pm
i like this alot!
 
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