Sordid, Solar Love MAG

November 6, 2010
By stardust-dreams PLATINUM, Las Vegas, Nevada
stardust-dreams PLATINUM, Las Vegas, Nevada
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The bright sun lusts after
The pale white moon
Seeking out her paradoxical nature
Against the black backdrop of space.

He reaches out to her with golden pennants
Just minutes of light across the way
“My love for you, Luna,
Is my sweet red tinge.”

And the moon, she spins gracefully before him
His showers of light reflecting across her craters
She smiles, showing her dimples, but
“I've got the tides on my mind,” she says,
Glowing across the orbiting city,
“Maybe next year.”

Orangey flares spring back into place
Those brilliant fiery affections sink back into his skin
He burns at the core with unrequited love,
With everything that he cannot hold without singeing.

The sun can only watch her dance
Traversing the ballroom of the universe
With a ball of dirt
While he holds them together, forever.

As she eclipses him
Again and again throughout the eons,
Such a sordid, solar love.

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This article has 3 comments.

racha BRONZE said...
on Sep. 24 2013 at 4:59 pm
racha BRONZE, Bejaia, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Le bonheur est quelque chose qui se multiplie quand il se divise".Paulo Coelho
which means:Happiness is something that multiplies when it is divided by Paulo Coelho

nothing to say or to write except 5 stars and OMG,what a talent!!!!!!really ur article is too awe-inspirin, really deserve to be on the teen ink magazine, i chose it to my favorit!!!!

on Mar. 28 2012 at 10:53 pm
stardust-dreams PLATINUM, Las Vegas, Nevada
24 articles 6 photos 10 comments
Thank you, both for reading and commenting. :)

on Mar. 27 2012 at 5:43 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

I can't believe no one has commented on this piece! This is spectacular, amazingly splendid~ I love the idea that the sun and the moon are linked together. The moon playing hard to get, playing with the sun and the sun helplessly in love, only able to watch from afar. Beautiful~


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