Fireworks

October 27, 2010
By TheAurorasFall PLATINUM, Dover, Pennsylvania
TheAurorasFall PLATINUM, Dover, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
life isn't about the number of moments you take to breathe, but about the number of moments that take your breathe away.


You send me somewhere no one should go.
With love then pain which I will not show.
To sing our song is all but a lie,
And saying you care is your only alibi.

To know this is fate will scare me away.
To live this life of which no one should stay.
Is what I’ve be in waiting for give it some time,
But waiting too long things may turn out fine.

If only you knew how many lies,
I can see from one look, it shows in your eyes.
On this day you take me far from here,
With the look on your face so fake, so sincere.

In the mist of the light hidden inside,
There are feelings shown which no one could hide.
When the end of this is able to start,
beautiful fireworks will explode in my heart.


The author's comments:
I wrote this on July 4th with no intention on directly relating it to the holiday.

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on Nov. 12 2010 at 4:48 pm
TheAurorasFall PLATINUM, Dover, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
life isn't about the number of moments you take to breathe, but about the number of moments that take your breathe away.

thanks for the advice. XD i actually had that written on the paper before i typed it. should've proofread again!

on Nov. 12 2010 at 4:37 pm
Healing_Angel SILVER, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Live for today, not for tomorrow

Nice job! The 3rd line of the 2nd stanza is really choppy. Change it to Is what I've been waiting for, give it time. Other than that, this s very well written. Love the imagery. Well done!  


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