Fireworks

October 27, 2010
You send me somewhere no one should go.
With love then pain which I will not show.
To sing our song is all but a lie,
And saying you care is your only alibi.

To know this is fate will scare me away.
To live this life of which no one should stay.
Is what I’ve be in waiting for give it some time,
But waiting too long things may turn out fine.

If only you knew how many lies,
I can see from one look, it shows in your eyes.
On this day you take me far from here,
With the look on your face so fake, so sincere.

In the mist of the light hidden inside,
There are feelings shown which no one could hide.
When the end of this is able to start,
beautiful fireworks will explode in my heart.





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Healing_Angel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 4:37 pm
Nice job! The 3rd line of the 2nd stanza is really choppy. Change it to Is what I've been waiting for, give it time. Other than that, this s very well written. Love the imagery. Well done!  
 
running4chance This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 4:48 pm
thanks for the advice. XD i actually had that written on the paper before i typed it. should've proofread again!
 
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