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October 28, 2010
By SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 294 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.


How unflinching,
Is the bittter pain,
Of deep and sorrowful,
Inner shame.
It nisther forgives,
Nor dains to relax.
But holds unbending,
It's prisoner to facts.
To torment,
Slowly.
For years on end.
It knowingly,
Reminds.
It will not forget.
But dares it's victim,
To try and overcome it.


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Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 10:03 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Is dains a word you made up? I just googled it and I looked it up at dictionary.com. Are you sure that's the correct spelling? Also, scornful benevolence doesn't make sense, it's an oxymoron. :) 

on Jul. 9 2011 at 8:12 pm
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 294 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

Dains is like scornful binevolence, it's complicated.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 5:02 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

It's Ok. :)

It's just the two lines

It nisther forgives(I think you mean neither)

Nor dains to relax.

No idea about dains.


on Jul. 8 2011 at 9:22 am
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 294 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

Critisism exepted. I know I made some mistakes when putting this one up.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 10:11 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

This is a great poem, I think it's your best. :) 

But typos!! 


on Jul. 5 2011 at 2:32 pm
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 294 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

I cannot very well judge my own poetry I'm afraid, so though I have writtin a grate deel sense this was posted, I don't honestly know if I've improved. I have sent in above twenty of my other poems, but the haven't been aproved yet, I can alwase post them on the formous though if you want to read them.  

on Jul. 5 2011 at 1:12 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

You have amazing talent, and good imagery, though I've noticed that you seem to have a terrible time with synonyms. Perhaps you have improved since your last poem posted to here?

S M Wells said...
on Jan. 11 2011 at 7:32 pm
Why thank you! I myself am not very fond of most poems I write. For I hold to the harsh truth. And actualy I don't know that I ever forgive myself for anything. But I do forget mostly after a while. I think writing helps me to recover sometimes from the meloncholy things of life. You worded your coment very well.

on Jan. 11 2011 at 7:14 pm
WingsFlyingHigh BRONZE, Sterling, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best." Marylin Monroe

I like this... It's really rings true with me. Shame is something you can try to ignore, but it will haunt you and haunt you until you forgive yourself. Even the small things that I shouldn't have done keep me up some nights in pain... Well written, it really touches the heart. 

S M Wells said...
on Nov. 18 2010 at 3:13 pm
OK...I won't!

on Nov. 18 2010 at 2:36 pm
echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
32 articles 3 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the world around me ceases to exist and then i will open up and let a cruel man like you in


~Unknown~

 Never mind then

SMWells said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 6:34 pm
Oh dear, I'm afraid I still don't get it. But nevermind that.

on Nov. 17 2010 at 5:37 pm
echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
32 articles 3 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the world around me ceases to exist and then i will open up and let a cruel man like you in


~Unknown~

That you poems wont show up

 


SMWells said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 4:21 pm
What in heavens name  is that soposed to mean?!

on Nov. 17 2010 at 2:50 pm
echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
32 articles 3 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the world around me ceases to exist and then i will open up and let a cruel man like you in


~Unknown~

Aw that sucks :-(

SMWells said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 8:00 pm
OH well...it looks as though the computer messed me last reply up a bit.

SMWells said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 7:52 pm
Thats posible. But this was definately my fault.And trust me...not easily forgiveable. When I said I could stop though,I was actualy talking about writing. I don't why it's not acsesable through,more by this auther on this poem.But this is not the only one they put on the website.

on Nov. 16 2010 at 7:31 pm
echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
32 articles 3 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the world around me ceases to exist and then i will open up and let a cruel man like you in


~Unknown~

it's human nature to feel shame, it comes with the territory of being a teenager too.

SMWells said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 4:35 pm
Thank you.I don't think I could stop if I tride.

on Nov. 16 2010 at 2:22 pm
echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
32 articles 3 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the world around me ceases to exist and then i will open up and let a cruel man like you in


~Unknown~

Not really, most people just wont admit to feeling shame. And what i said is exactly how i feel. I love this, keep writing.


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