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Broken Heart

I watch it fade into darkness,
Like sunsets into night,
I watch it fall into nothing,
Like birds hovering in flight,
I watch the darkness creep up,
Through all the spaces between,
Where you would stand by my side,
Where you can no longer be seen,
I watch you walk away,
As if you didn’t care,
With one foot in front of the other,
Leaving me here to stare,
Watching The Coldness enclose me,
The sound of footsteps ceases,
I stand here wishing you hadn’t left yet,
Leaving my heart in pieces…




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prettygirl daysha said...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 1:41 pm:
this poem is like dat
 
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Ninalaw said...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 9:25 am:
I couldn't relate the birds hovering part but i loved everything else! As i was reading it i could picture all of it happening and hear the person walk away. it's sad but very good.
 
Mariah_13 replied...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 4:09 pm :
thank you so much! check out my other work!
 
Mariah_13 replied...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 9:31 pm :
i agree.... that verse doesnt make sense... huh... any ideas? :)
 
Ninalaw replied...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 12:25 pm :

um . . . like an abyss in sight . . that might work cause an abyss is like deep space that never seems to end and it could fit in with your next lines.

just a thought

 
Mariah_13 replied...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 5:20 pm :
yea i get what ur saying :) thats a good idea! thanks for ur help, plz check out my other work!
 
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