Broken Heart

October 24, 2010
By Mariah_13 PLATINUM, Vienna, Virginia
Mariah_13 PLATINUM, Vienna, Virginia
27 articles 9 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take your breath away.


I watch it fade into darkness,
Like sunsets into night,
I watch it fall into nothing,
Like birds hovering in flight,
I watch the darkness creep up,
Through all the spaces between,
Where you would stand by my side,
Where you can no longer be seen,
I watch you walk away,
As if you didn’t care,
With one foot in front of the other,
Leaving me here to stare,
Watching The Coldness enclose me,
The sound of footsteps ceases,
I stand here wishing you hadn’t left yet,
Leaving my heart in pieces…



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on Nov. 11 2010 at 5:20 pm
Mariah_13 PLATINUM, Vienna, Virginia
27 articles 9 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take your breath away.

yea i get what ur saying :) thats a good idea! thanks for ur help, plz check out my other work!

Ninalaw SILVER said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 12:25 pm
Ninalaw SILVER, Tucson, Arizona
8 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
“We delight in the beauty of the butterfly, but rarely admit the changes it has gone through to achieve that beauty.”~Maya Angelou

um . . . like an abyss in sight . . that might work cause an abyss is like deep space that never seems to end and it could fit in with your next lines.

just a thought


on Nov. 10 2010 at 9:31 pm
Mariah_13 PLATINUM, Vienna, Virginia
27 articles 9 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take your breath away.

i agree.... that verse doesnt make sense... huh... any ideas? :)

on Nov. 10 2010 at 4:09 pm
Mariah_13 PLATINUM, Vienna, Virginia
27 articles 9 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take your breath away.

thank you so much! check out my other work!

on Nov. 10 2010 at 1:41 pm
this poem is like dat

Ninalaw SILVER said...
on Nov. 10 2010 at 9:25 am
Ninalaw SILVER, Tucson, Arizona
8 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
“We delight in the beauty of the butterfly, but rarely admit the changes it has gone through to achieve that beauty.”~Maya Angelou

I couldn't relate the birds hovering part but i loved everything else! As i was reading it i could picture all of it happening and hear the person walk away. it's sad but very good.




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