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They come from your mom
or they appeared out of no where
they may come over your house
just to do your hair.

They got your back
through thick and thin
they never leave you
even if it is the end.

They help you fight your battles
because your not alone
they even talk some sense to them crazy people
over the phone.

We are not a gang
we don't like to fight
but nobody messes with our sisters
not when we still see the sunlight.

Sisters means 5 things
Still In Sight Till Everybody Rest
remember this right here
this is not a test.

There is no pass
and there is no fail
there's only helping eachother out
protecting ous sisters from hell.

I got your back
and they got mine
puts us all together
we form a very long line.





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kmarie14 said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 6:05 pm
I really like this! my best friend is more like a sister then anything else! awwesomme poem! :) you have really strong personality in your writing
 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 6:09 pm
thanks much it helps to have someone by your side
 
XCLover said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 10:30 am

I love this! A few months ago I met someone who has become a sister to me. I'd never had a relationship like that with any of my other friends, it's amazing how great it feels to be able to count on someone like we lean on each other :)

One thing I would do, especially with a poem like this, is keep an eye on the number of syllables in each line. It helps the poem to flow better, to stick to a certain rythym. For example, look at the second stanza. The first two lines are 4 syllables, ... (more »)

 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 6:08 pm
thanks for the advice ill try i really dont focus on the syllables i just write to write
 
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