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My Taylor

She is the wind beneath my wings
The peanut butter to my jelly
The pencil to my paper
The toothbrush to my paste
I only equal one half
But both of us equal one whole
I am the laces to her shoes
The water to her bottle
And the pedal to her flower
I AM HER OTHER HALF!





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XCLover said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 10:33 am

I love this! It's a simple, creative way to get a message across that is often overy dramatic and sappy.

One critique: When talking about flower petals, the word is petal instead of pedal. Pedal is like a bike pedal.

 
gabster101 replied...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 11:25 am
Thanks so much! I realized my spelling error after I posted! :)
 
XCLover replied...
Nov. 7, 2010 at 11:50 am
No problem :) Don't you hate that? There should be an edit button for things like that ;)
 
gabster101 replied...
Nov. 7, 2010 at 1:08 pm
I KNOW! It should be that way! :)
 
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