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My Taylor

October 21, 2010
By gabster101 SILVER, Sherwood, Oregon
gabster101 SILVER, Sherwood, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
Love like you mean it!


She is the wind beneath my wings
The peanut butter to my jelly
The pencil to my paper
The toothbrush to my paste
I only equal one half
But both of us equal one whole
I am the laces to her shoes
The water to her bottle
And the pedal to her flower
I AM HER OTHER HALF!



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gabster101 said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 1:08 pm
I KNOW! It should be that way! :)

XCLover GOLD said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 11:50 am
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!" ~Anon
"You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone." ~Percy Cerutti
"The hug is incomplete without you :3" NinjaMan

No problem :) Don't you hate that? There should be an edit button for things like that ;)

gabster101 said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 11:25 am
Thanks so much! I realized my spelling error after I posted! :)

XCLover GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 10:33 am
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
18 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!" ~Anon
"You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone." ~Percy Cerutti
"The hug is incomplete without you :3" NinjaMan

I love this! It's a simple, creative way to get a message across that is often overy dramatic and sappy.

One critique: When talking about flower petals, the word is petal instead of pedal. Pedal is like a bike pedal.