HATE WITH PAIN

October 22, 2010
By lateasha BRONZE, Coloma, Michigan
lateasha BRONZE, Coloma, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
" We do not fall in love with beautiful people; we find them beautiful because we love them."


As i stand here with rain dripping off my hair i look into tthe shadows as i look at the ground and i look and see you were there when you were alive
screams
cries
heart is hurting
falls on ground if you loved me you would be here with me but your not you left me in the rain
screams
cries
falls on ground never in my life thought you would leave me so soon but no one knows when your time is up i guess i didnt no when your timw as up
screams
cries
falls on ground in pain wanting to die since yuor gone now why am i even alive i have no one anyway o wait i do but they dont care about me


The author's comments:
wrote this for people who have been through pain and hard times with hate

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Miseltoe GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 5:36 pm
Miseltoe GOLD, Boneville, Georgia
15 articles 2 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm a loser and I love to lose. Each time I lose its different, it teaches me something else... but winning loses its glamour after the first few times. so I love to lose

With constructive critism you should say the good then the bad. This is a great piece.

trblue GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 9:57 am
trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
14 articles 7 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown. It only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that mother@#?!&* upside the head. "

you misspelled time and your. you

need to look over your stuff. but

over all it is verry good.



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