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HATE WITH PAIN

As i stand here with rain dripping off my hair i look into tthe shadows as i look at the ground and i look and see you were there when you were alive
screams
cries
heart is hurting
falls on ground if you loved me you would be here with me but your not you left me in the rain
screams
cries
falls on ground never in my life thought you would leave me so soon but no one knows when your time is up i guess i didnt no when your timw as up
screams
cries
falls on ground in pain wanting to die since yuor gone now why am i even alive i have no one anyway o wait i do but they dont care about me





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trblue said...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 9:57 am

you misspelled time and your. you

need to look over your stuff. but

over all it is verry good.

 
Miseltoe replied...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 5:36 pm
With constructive critism you should say the good then the bad. This is a great piece.
 
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