Memory Lane

Every song reminds me of you
Every song makes the tears fall
They flow down to my cheek
Down to my chin
It's like getting stabbed by the most tiniest pin
But you bleed so much and
You scream all of your hurt sooo loud...
It makes you go insane
On memory lane
Now their are no more hugs and
Never to be kisses
Thoes are uncompleted wishes </3





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EmotionsCrave said...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 4:16 pm
Sorry I didn't notice that i spelled some wrong GAH! -__- i'll do better next time! and now i feel like re-writing part of it cuz 1 part sounds weird 2 me but it would take soo long for it 2 get published again... sorry people who look at this and go ugh!....
 
singingdetective replied...
Feb. 1, 2011 at 10:38 am
oh, no, it's fine. It almost made me start crying. I think you should a little more "story" to it, more background. Maybe it's just me, but making it more personal (in some respects) makes it more meaningful. But otherwise, I think it's pretty good :) keep it up!
 
EmotionsCrave replied...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 7:51 pm
more personal? ok i'll try it! thank you!
 
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