Learning from love

October 10, 2010
By MariaL BRONZE, Athens, Other
MariaL BRONZE, Athens, Other
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Favorite Quote:
If ever there is tomorrow when we're not together.. there is something you must always remember. you are braver than you believe, stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think. but the most important thing is, even if we're apart.. i'll always be with you.”

The feeling comes without warning,
Bright,like the sun rising in the morning.
It completely takes over your mind,
As both your futures become twined.

The scent of the sweetness,
There is no time for disceetness.
Just take their hand,
And wonder through no man's land.

Without love you are dying,
And you find yourself constantly sighing.
Because nothing else is as mesmerizing,
And to yourself you don't like lying.

When you felt like you were grasping air,
There was always someone there to care.
And now you are lost without them,
Like a flower without a stem.

So nobody is there to support,
What is in your every thought.
Go running back,
Find the courage that you lack.

And beg for a different ending,
Because you have stopped pretending.
That your life story is written to perfection,
So you are finally walking in a different direction.

The author's comments:
The poem was written while listening to an inspiring piece of piano music. To be specific: Kiss the rain by Yiruma. I hope to get positive and negative feedback that can help me learn what mistakes I have done with this poem.

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This article has 2 comments.

albertan said...
on Oct. 25 2010 at 1:01 pm
mariaa; that was really good. yue have always been a good poet since primary school. ihope that one day yue will become a great poet. <33

LeXxiBuZz said...
on Oct. 25 2010 at 10:17 am
Veeeery nice! coz i dont know how to frieking rate it with the stars ill give you a 4/5


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