In the End

October 13, 2010
By darling_bre GOLD, Dunellen, New Jersey
darling_bre GOLD, Dunellen, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Darling I have absolutely no idea how an Avatar makes babies..." -William Lucas

I’ve made my final decision.
And I’m sure it’s something that I can live with.
Because I’ve seen how far you’ve fallen.
And you’re so far down,
You’re not even worth the effort.
In fact,
You’re not even worth the effort to make the effort.
Your immaturity succumbs you.
I can’t stand that smug smile,
So wipe it off your face.
That rotten smile,
The cigarette-stained hole.
And that disgusting laugh,
The one that makes my stomach churn,
From the acidic alcohol on your breath.
You disgust me.
And I know that it hurts,
To know the truth.
That you’ll never be good enough.
And that he’ll always worth it.
And that you’ll never measure up.
And that you’re not even half the man he is.
And that he has my heart.
I wish I could say that I’m sorry.
But honestly,
I’m not.
And I hate you.
I always will.
It just took me awhile to remember.
And that’s all.

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on Oct. 25 2010 at 10:08 pm
Michelle24 GOLD, Riverwoods, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."-Dr. Seuss

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take but by the moments that take our breath away."-Unknown

I love this! Please check out some of my work!

Alice_C SILVER said...
on Oct. 24 2010 at 9:37 pm
Alice_C SILVER, Edgewood, Iowa
8 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
We all have dark secrets, just no one knows them.- Me
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it dosent, then it was never meant to be."-unknown

this is good, but here's a couple thoughts

*don't use so many ands to start a sentence

good job though and keep it up


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