October 11, 2010
Deep breath in
Deep breath out
Hear the clicking of the keys
Feel your soul setting free
The flow of words from you mind
To each and every written line
Every word filled with feeling
With love, angst, and fear
All thoughts leave your mind
As the blank page comes alive

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SMWells said...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 9:31 am
As a felow poet... I can't agree with you.
HaleyBree replied...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 1:37 pm

well, ashlyn i can agree with you!(:

Its a very good poem!(:

SMWells replied...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 2:45 pm
What I disagreed with was the[ All thoughts leav your mind ] How can you write of your not thinking?
WriterWithWings replied...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 3:15 pm
I don't know. How do you? Because it sure doesn't seem like you apply any thinking
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