I miss you

October 11, 2010
By clairem BRONZE, Liverpool, New York
clairem BRONZE, Liverpool, New York
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I miss seeing you everyday. I miss the feeling of walking into the room, my heart pounding with happiness and expectation. I miss drowning in your eyes as you gazed into mine, my heart skipping a beat. I miss the funny faces you would make at me just to make me smile. I miss the imprint of your hand on my shoulder, the gentle brush of your fingers in my hair. I miss the way one look from you took away all my worries and fears, leaving me as light as a butterfly. I miss your beautiful smile, the way it lit up my heart. But mostly, I just miss you, and all that you are. I just want you to hold me in your arms and tell me that you miss me too.

The author's comments:
Maybe it's not a prize-winning, thought-provoking work of art, but it's what's on my heart. And that's what counts.

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on Oct. 21 2010 at 4:11 pm
Rosemary-Martin BRONZE, Haines, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"What you do speaks so loudly, I cannot hear what you say" -Emerson

This is really pretty, but the formatting could be fixed, Good work! 



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