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Apple Crisp

By , Brighton, MI, MI
Mmmm…
Carmel dripping down the mountain of ice cream, mmm..
Hot fudge drooling down the sides of the crisp cinnamon crust, mmm…
Cinnamon, apples, and icing spilling out of the pie, mmm…
Sweet, silky, cold vanilla bean ice cream splattered on the plate, mmm…
Taste buds screaming, “eat it!” when they see the apple crisp, mmm…
My mouth watering, drooling, taste buds screaming, for the apple crisp, mmm…
Sweet, warm, marvelous apple crisp, the most amazing dessert you can eat.
Mmmm…





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Soccergirl15 said...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 9:05 am
U r a stealr!  so just admit tht u stole my number buddy!
 
35kiddeum said...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 8:22 am
nice piece logan
 
Loggie15 replied...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 8:24 am
Thx! 35kiddeum!
 
35kiddeum replied...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 8:59 am
its grace, logan >=(
 
Loggie15 replied...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 2:57 pm
Yeaaah...i know!
 
Loggie15 said...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 8:21 am

Pretty good, not my best.

 

 
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