Embers

October 6, 2010
By MadiBee BRONZE, Lancaster, New Hampshire
MadiBee BRONZE, Lancaster, New Hampshire
4 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
If at first you don't succeed, you are running about average.
- M.H. Anderson


Upon the midnight blue and the pearly glow of morn
Shines the glowing embers of life and love.
Between the reality of day and the pull of night and dreams
Lays a sight of surrealism and a song of silence.
The whispers of the day unknown
Rend the warm blanket of sleep away.
The crisp cold wind, tugging,
Tugging at my senses, to waken another day.


Walking on a well worn pat, yet a path rarely used
Each step buoyed by the sight of my beloved
For the glowing embers of a life well lived have nothing
On the beauty who holds my heart and walks beside me
The embers of life ending to hold forth a way
For the new bud of life a whisper of a new day.

Upon the midnight blue and the pearly glow of morn
Shines all the brighter, the embers of life and love
Life well lived and love well carried
Colors bright, hues mellow and bleeding stains
Carry a message, upon the midnight and morn
Of a life well lived a love that prevails on.


The author's comments:
This was originaly a school piece, but my teacher urged me to publish it. We had to write a poem inspired by fall. You can see how I kinda went of course, hahaha. Hope you like it

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MadiBee BRONZE said...
on Dec. 7 2010 at 4:14 pm
MadiBee BRONZE, Lancaster, New Hampshire
4 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
If at first you don't succeed, you are running about average.
- M.H. Anderson

My thoughts exactlly! too bad teenink doesnt have one lol

 


_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Dec. 4 2010 at 11:13 am
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

don't worry i didn't even notice them and you have better spelling than me - thank gosh for spell  check :)

MadiBee BRONZE said...
on Dec. 4 2010 at 10:20 am
MadiBee BRONZE, Lancaster, New Hampshire
4 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
If at first you don't succeed, you are running about average.
- M.H. Anderson

Thank you so so much! i apoligize for the spelling errors, i am a horrible speller ;)

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Dec. 3 2010 at 3:41 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

Beautiful :)


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