through my eyes

October 3, 2010
By kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller


The sun tip toes
Up into the
Black forgotten sky
Tickling the cold
Frost bitten mountains
As the light passes by

Tingling warmth
A sensation undescribed
Love ever lasting
Has lived through the night

Earth in herself heaves a sad sigh
As we all say our last goodbye
To earth
And to life

But love will live on
And the sun will still rise
Because that is life
Through my eyes



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Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jun. 12 2011 at 9:25 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

This is one of your most beautiful poems that I have ever read. It it your best, I think. Love it! 

on Oct. 29 2010 at 9:16 am
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

Thank you!!! :)

on Oct. 26 2010 at 8:19 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

Thank you:) i am so happy to hear you liked it ;)

on Oct. 26 2010 at 3:44 pm
Hummingbird GOLD, Berryton, Kansas
16 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is either a daring adventure or nothing. -Helen Keller

This poem is simple, yet it discusses a very complicated topic. I like your strong verbs and I have a clear mental image of the surroundings. Nice Job!!

on Oct. 23 2010 at 7:18 pm
mwahxandxmwa SILVER, Melbourne, Other
6 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Silence is golden...duct tape is silver" - a random T-shirt

Thank-you im glad you wrote it! Mwah :D

on Oct. 22 2010 at 7:12 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

hehe(: i am glad you enjoyed it! :)

on Oct. 18 2010 at 11:31 pm
mwahxandxmwa SILVER, Melbourne, Other
6 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Silence is golden...duct tape is silver" - a random T-shirt

This is truly gorgeous and the flow is amazing it reads and speaks so easily! Very talented mwah :D

on Oct. 16 2010 at 11:38 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

thanksss :)

on Oct. 16 2010 at 12:42 am
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
226 articles 4 photos 241 comments
BEAUTIFUL AND GIVES INSIGHT ON UR THOUGHTS!! LUV IT  


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