through my eyes

October 3, 2010
The sun tip toes
Up into the
Black forgotten sky
Tickling the cold
Frost bitten mountains
As the light passes by

Tingling warmth
A sensation undescribed
Love ever lasting
Has lived through the night

Earth in herself heaves a sad sigh
As we all say our last goodbye
To earth
And to life

But love will live on
And the sun will still rise
Because that is life
Through my eyes

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Aderes18 said...
Jun. 12, 2011 at 9:25 pm
This is one of your most beautiful poems that I have ever read. It it your best, I think. Love it! 
Hummingbird This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 3:44 pm
This poem is simple, yet it discusses a very complicated topic. I like your strong verbs and I have a clear mental image of the surroundings. Nice Job!!
kmarie14 replied...
Oct. 29, 2010 at 9:16 am
Thank you!!! :)
mwahxandxmwa said...
Oct. 23, 2010 at 7:18 pm
Thank-you im glad you wrote it! Mwah :D
kmarie14 replied...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 8:19 pm
Thank you:) i am so happy to hear you liked it ;)
mwahxandxmwa said...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 11:31 pm
This is truly gorgeous and the flow is amazing it reads and speaks so easily! Very talented mwah :D
kmarie14 replied...
Oct. 22, 2010 at 7:12 pm
hehe(: i am glad you enjoyed it! :)
CameandgonesmartyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 12:42 am
kmarie14 replied...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 11:38 pm
thanksss :)
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