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life is the greatest gift ever
but death is the worst.
life gives you laughter
and death gives you tears
you smile while your alive but as you die you dont.you open your eyes at birth but close them at death.why we ask but no anser.
this goes to show death is closer then life





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LunaWingsFlyAway said...
Oct. 15, 2010 at 5:54 pm
i actually really like this poem...its short and simple...but says alot...and like Ameezy sed...it pointed out things i never realized befoee
 
Ameezy said...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 7:35 pm
This is really good. I totally got the vibe and it points out things I had never thought of! Good job!
 
missTaco said...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 7:09 pm
i like it a lot!
 
Alice_Capel said...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 7:09 pm
i like it a lot very well written only mistake is spelling 'answer'
 
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